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Short Story · Describe a character's traits using evidence from her actions, words and thoughts, and tell lasting traits apart from feelings that change
Short Story: The Last Treat in the Bowl
Original fiction. On Halloween, Nora reaches the last full-size treat first. Use her actions, words and thoughts to name her traits, not just feelings.
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The plan
This is an original short story. The characters and Maple Crescent are invented.
Nora had been building her Halloween costume for a whole week. She cut the flaps off a big cardboard box, painted red and white stripes around it and glued a paper-towel tube to the top of her hat. Inside the tube she taped a small flashlight. When she switched it on, the light swept across the ceiling. She was a lighthouse.
She had also made a map. On a sheet of graph paper, she drew every house on Maple Crescent and put a star on the ones that left their porch lights on last year. The biggest star was on Number 14. Mrs. Okafor gave out full-size chocolate bars, the giant kind, not the tiny ones. Last year they were gone by 7:30. Nora drew an arrow from her front door straight to Number 14. "This year," she told her friend Sam, "we get there by 7:15."[1]
A ripped bag
At 6:45 on October 31, Nora and Sam set off. Sam was a robot wrapped in tinfoil, and he clanked a little when he walked. They were right on schedule until they reached the corner by the mailbox.
A very small pumpkin was standing on the sidewalk, crying. It was Leo from Number 9. He was about four, and his big sister, Priya, was kneeling beside him. His paper bag had ripped on the wet sidewalk, and his candy had rolled into a deep pile of leaves.
Nora looked at her watch. It was 7:05. Then she looked at Leo. She knelt down, switched on her lighthouse and pointed the beam into the leaves. "Look, there's a lollipop," she said. "And two more over here." Sam groaned, then crouched down to help too.
They found most of the candy, but a few pieces had slipped through the grate of the storm drain. Leo stared down at them and sniffled. Priya tied his bag shut with her hair elastic. Nora checked her watch again. It was 7:20. If we run, she thought, we can still make it.[1]
One left
They ran. Nora's cardboard tower bounced against her knees, and Sam's tinfoil rattled all the way up the walk of Number 14. Mrs. Okafor opened the door wearing a tall witch's hat. She tipped her bowl toward them.
There was one full-size chocolate bar left. Just one.
"Well, look at that," Mrs. Okafor said. "The very last one. Who's first?"
Nora's heart jumped. She was first. Her hand was already moving toward the bowl when she heard small footsteps on the walk behind her. Priya and Leo were coming up to the door. Leo was holding his tied-up bag with both hands.
"Take it," Sam whispered. "You got here first. That's the rule."
Nora's hand hovered over the bowl. I planned this for a whole week, she thought. I drew the map. Nobody would blame me. Then she thought about the candy sitting at the bottom of the storm drain, where Leo could see it but never reach it.[1]
The choice
Nora pulled her hand back. "Mrs. Okafor," she said, "could Leo have it? He lost a lot of his candy tonight."
Mrs. Okafor raised her eyebrows under the witch's hat. Then she smiled and held the bowl down low. Leo looked at the giant chocolate bar, then at Nora, then at the bar again, as if he was not sure it was allowed. "Go on," Nora said. Leo grabbed it with both hands and hugged it to his pumpkin. "Thank you," Priya mouthed over his head.
For a second, Nora felt a small, sour twist in her stomach. She had wanted that chocolate bar since last Halloween. But when she saw Leo trying to fit the bar into his tied-up bag, the sour feeling turned into something warmer.
On the way down the walk, Sam shook his head. "You planned for a whole week," he said. "I know," Nora said. She was already thinking. "Next year we leave at 6:30. And I'm bringing tape for anybody whose bag rips."[1]
A drawing on the door
At home, Nora's bag was lighter than she had hoped. She sorted her candy into piles on the kitchen floor and gave her little brother the lollipops, because she knew they were his favourite.
The next morning, November 1, there was a piece of paper taped to the front door. It was a crayon drawing of a red-and-white lighthouse with a bright yellow beam. Beside it sat a small orange pumpkin. At the bottom, in Priya's neat printing, it said: THANK YOU, NORA. Under that was a wobbly letter L.
Nora carried the drawing up to her room and taped it on the wall beside her map of Maple Crescent. Then she took out a new sheet of graph paper and started planning next year's route.[1]
Fast lesson
Use these checks before you answer the practice questions.
Before reading, ask: 'What are you like most of the time?' (a trait) and 'How do you feel right now?' (a feeling). Then use the same two questions for Nora at the door of Number 14.
Make three columns labelled Actions, Words and Thoughts. As you read, add one detail to each column. In this story, Nora's thoughts are marked with 'she thought', as in 'If we run, she thought, we can still make it.'
Children often say 'nice' or 'good' for every character. Offer a word bank: generous, determined, resourceful, careful, thoughtful, helpful. Ask your child to choose the most precise word and prove it.
Talk about how Nora wanted the chocolate bar and still chose to give it away. Feeling tempted does not make someone selfish; the choice they make tells more about their character.
Common mistakes
Why this fails: 'Excited' or 'disappointed' describes one moment. A trait such as 'determined' shows up again and again across the story.
Why this fails: 'Nora is generous' needs proof, such as giving Leo the last bar and giving her brother the lollipops.
Why this fails: Nora's hand moved toward the bowl, but her other actions show the fuller picture. Look for a pattern.
Word Lab
Use the meaning, hear the word, then try it in your own sentence.
character trait
noun phrasea word that describes what a character is like most of the time, such as kind, careful or determined
One of Nora's character traits is that she is a planner.
feeling
nounhow someone feels at one moment, such as happy, worried or disappointed; feelings can change quickly
Nora's feeling changed from excited to disappointed in a few seconds.
evidence
noundetails from the text that show something is true
Stopping to help Leo is evidence that Nora is kind.
generous
adjectivehappy to give or share things with others
Giving the last bar to Leo was a generous choice.
determined
adjectivenot giving up on a goal even when something goes wrong
Nora was determined to reach Number 14 by 7:15.
resourceful
adjectivegood at finding clever ways to make or fix things with what you have
Nora was resourceful when she used her costume's flashlight to search the leaves.
tempted
adjectivewanting to do something even though you are not sure it is the right choice
Nora was tempted to take the chocolate bar.
route
nounthe way you plan to travel from one place to another
Nora drew her route on graph paper.
on schedule
phrasedoing something at the time you planned
They were right on schedule until they reached the corner.
hover
verbto stay in the air in one place without moving forward
Nora's hand hovered over the bowl.
sniffle
verbto breathe in noisily through your nose, often while crying
Leo stared at the drain and sniffled.
grate
nouna metal frame with bars over a hole, such as a storm drain
Some candy slipped through the grate of the storm drain.
Check your understanding
Choose an answer, explain your choice, and then check. Hints and retries are welcome.
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Support · Find it in the text
Support · Find it in the text practice
Each answer is stated in the story. Point to the sentence.
1. What did Nora make her costume from?
2. Why did Nora want to reach Number 14 by 7:15?
3. What happened to Leo's bag?
4. Where did the candy they could not find end up?
5. What did Sam whisper to Nora at the door?
6. What was taped to Nora's door on November 1?
Apply · Trait plus evidence
Apply · Trait plus evidence practice
Name the trait, then point to an action, words or a thought.
7. Name a trait the costume and the map show, and explain why.
8. What trait does Nora show when she gives her little brother the lollipops at home?
9. Is 'disappointed' a trait or a feeling for Nora? Explain.
10. Which thought helps Nora decide to give the bar to Leo?
11. What trait does Sam show when he groans but then crouches down to help?
12. Nora's costume is a lighthouse. What does a lighthouse do, and how does that fit what Nora does for Leo?
Reason · Weigh the evidence
Reason · Weigh the evidence practice
Test trait claims and sort traits from feelings.
13. Sort into traits and feelings: excited, generous, tempted, determined, resourceful, disappointed.
14. A classmate says, 'Nora is selfish because she wanted the chocolate bar.' Do you agree? Use evidence.
15. Put in order: Nora asks Mrs. Okafor to give Leo the bar; Leo's bag rips; Nora draws a map; a drawing appears on the door.
16. How does the last paragraph show that Nora is still determined, even after she gave the bar away?
17. Write the story's message in one sentence of your own.
Practice answer key
- 1. A big cardboard box painted with red and white stripes, a paper-towel tube on her hat and a small flashlight.
See 'The plan'. - 2. Mrs. Okafor gives full-size chocolate bars, and last year they were gone by 7:30.
See the end of 'The plan'. - 3. It ripped on the wet sidewalk, and his candy rolled into the leaves.
See 'A ripped bag'. - 4. Down the grate of the storm drain.
See the last paragraph of 'A ripped bag'. - 5. "Take it. You got here first. That's the rule."
See 'One left'. - 6. A crayon drawing of a lighthouse and a pumpkin that said THANK YOU, NORA, with a wobbly L.
See 'A drawing on the door'. - 7. Nora is a careful planner (or creative, or determined): she spent a week building the costume and drew a map with stars on the best houses.
Actions repeated over time are strong evidence for a trait. - 8. Generous or thoughtful: she gives away candy because she knows they are his favourite.
A second generous action shows the trait is not a one-time event. - 9. A feeling. She feels disappointed for a second at the door, but it soon turns warmer. It is not what she is like all the time.
Feelings belong to a moment; traits show up across the story. - 10. She thinks about the candy at the bottom of the storm drain, where Leo could see it but never reach it.
Thoughts show what a character cares about. - 11. He is helpful (or a good friend): he does not want to lose time, but he helps anyway.
You can find traits for every character, not only the main one. - 12. A lighthouse shines a light to help people find their way; Nora shines her light to help Leo find his candy.
Authors sometimes choose details that match a character's traits. - 13. Traits: generous, determined, resourceful. Feelings: excited, tempted, disappointed.
Ask: is this how she is most of the time, or how she feels right now? - 14. No. Wanting the bar was a feeling of temptation. Her actions (helping Leo, giving him the bar, sharing lollipops) show she is generous, not selfish.
Judge a trait by what a character chooses to do, not only what she wants for a moment. - 15. Nora draws a map → Leo's bag rips → Nora asks Mrs. Okafor to give Leo the bar → a drawing appears on the door.
Follow the story from before Halloween to November 1. - 16. She starts planning next year's route on a new sheet of graph paper.
Being generous did not change her other trait; characters can have several traits. - 17. Answers will vary, such as: Being kind can feel hard in the moment but still be the right choice.
A theme is a lesson about life, not a summary of events.
Related skills
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Nora is determined. She spends a whole week building her lighthouse costume and draws a map so she can reach Number 14 by 7:15. Even after the last chocolate bar is gone, she says, "Next year we leave at 6:30," and starts planning a new route. Nora is also generous. She stops to help Leo find his candy, even though she is in a hurry, and she asks Mrs. Okafor to give him the last bar. Her thoughts show it was not easy, because she thinks, "Nobody would blame me," before she remembers Leo's candy in the drain. At the door, Nora feels tempted and then disappointed. That is a feeling, not a trait, because it lasts only a moment and soon turns into something warmer.
Sources and revision notes
Source check: 2026-10-31. Grade guidance is an editorial suggestion, not a standardised reading score.
- Reading Rockets — Story Maps (reading-strategy background only)
- Reading Rockets — Beyond the Story Map (reading-strategy background only)
What changed in this edition?
Original fiction. All characters, Maple Crescent, Number 14 and the Halloween events are invented. The sources support the reading strategy, not the story's events: Reading Rockets' Story Maps page describes graphic organizers for story elements, with more advanced organizers focusing on plot or character traits; Beyond the Story Map (McTigue and colleagues, first published in The Reading Teacher, 2015) describes connecting characters' thoughts and feelings to their actions and choosing books whose characters have a few consistent personality traits. The trait-versus-feeling 'most of the time' test and the actions, words and thoughts chart are this lesson's teaching framing. The story is not about any real person.